Hotel Teen Queen (The Finish) by Mr. Cage

[cage]

See the warning in part one. In short don't read if your not into this stuff. Of course, if your not into it what are you doing looking at this warning.

Hotel Teen Queen

PART TWO

Three eggs were placed in the black drum. The drum was turned and two eggs were pulled out. The first fighters were Mandy and Annisa. This would be the first fight between Mandy and Annisa of the day. Annisa was the tallest, blackest most exotic girl in the room. At 5?11?? and 124 pounds she possessed a tight, slender muscular 34B 22 32 body with very black, smooth skin. Her nipples were rock hard finger-like projections sticking out from small coal black aureole with very little tit meat. Her crotch was shaved nude and her vaginal lips were thin and tight, thinner and tighter than the lips on her mouth. She was apparently first generation African immigrant from one of those perpetually hungry places. Her face was swollen of course, but at one time she could have easily made it on American?s teen model as they shy black girl.

The bloody tape from the last round was still in place. So Mandy, batter and bruised faced Annisa in a classic battle of the beauties, battered beauties. They started out slow with Mandy?s jabs just missing because of Annisa?s longer, thin arms. The thin black girl?s hard knuckles reddened Mandy?s already swollen cheeks and reopened her lips. Mandy finally stepped inside and dug a low punch into the black girl?s very thin lower belly. Annisa grunted and clubbed my girl across the side of the head with a forearm. Mandy took the blow and charged into Annisa, driving the skinny girl back hard into the wall. Once against the wall Mandy pumped rapid fire rights in lefts into Annisa?s body. The tall girl groaned and hammered Mandy?s back and kidneys with looping shots.

Mandy kept close and mulched the thin girl?s belly really hurting her. Annisa raised her right arm up over Mandy?s back and started driving her sharp elbow down into my daughter?s upper back and then neck. Four neck shots forced Mandy to pull away. As she did Annisa grabbed her behind the neck and held her bent over at a slight angle. Mandy drove uppercuts into Annisa?s tits and belly, but the tall black girl executed five hard right knees up into Mandy?s belly and one perfect shot to her still bloody cunt.

The last shot hurt Mandy and she fell to her knees grabbing Annisa?s thin thighs with her arms. The hands were still taped shut so most wrestling holds were difficult. Annisa drove ax handle shots to the back of my daughter?s head, rattling her teeth I?m sure. Mandy took the punishment, crossed her hands behind Annisa?s knees and then pushed forward on her knees while lifting. Annisa?s club like fists flailed for balance can the tall black girl suddenly fell backwards. Her head hit the wall with a crack.

Mandy crawled through the downed girl?s legs and straddled her hips. Annisa tried to sit up and knock the blonde off her. Mandy?s right fist hit the black girl on the point her nose and knocked her back against the wall. Mandy leaned forward with her left fist planted on the black girl?s chest. Then she hammered Annisa?s face with her right fist driving the girl?s head against the wall again and again. Annisa?s arms blocked and she rolled onto her side to escape.

Mandy crawled up on the girl?s side and fired lefts into her front and right?s into her back. Mandy punched and punched, sweat flying off her and blood spattering from her mouth. Annisa rolled onto her back and stunned me with the strength of her whip thin body by pushing up on her hands and knees. Mandy was shocked too. She fell forwards over Annisa?s head and ended up in a wild scramble. The black girl backed out from between my daughter?s legs and rose up on her knees as Mandy scrambled to turn around. Annisa?s long right connected flush on Mandy?s left eye as she turned to meet the threat. Mandy?s matted hair still managed to fly as her head whipped around and she fell on her side, stunned and blinded in one eye.

Now the black girl scrambled on top. She hammered lefts into Mandy?s face and right?s into the back of my girl?s head. Mandy rolled onto her back exposing her face to both the black girl?s hard little fists. Annisa was brutally efficient, but Mandy bucked up and rocked the black girl forward. Annisa fell across Mandy?s face and my girl quickly encircled the thin black girl?s back with her arms. I thought she would hold on until the end of the round, but I forgot this was a no rules taped fist fight.

Annisa screamed bloody murder and frantically tried to push away from my darling little cheerleader. As the black girl squirmed and rolled off, Mandy rolled with her still plastered against he thin wiry black body. Then it was clear, Mandy?s bloody mouth was fastened to Annisa?s tiny tits. While my girl may have looked like a leech, she wasn?t sucking tit, she was biting without restraint. Annisa screamed and screamed. She started kicking her feet and hammering Mandy?s neck and head with rabbit punches.

Before she could escape the round ended. It took four guys and the promoter to separate the girls. When they came apart and we got a chance to look at them, there was a collective gasp. The little bitches had savaged one another. Mandy?s face was a swollen mask and her left eye was almost shut. Her lips were swollen, split and leaking steadily. Her nose was bright red and swollen with blood dribbling from both nostrils. Her beautiful face had taken a savage beating. Annisa?s dark black skin didn?t show the same color or bruising, but it too was badly swollen and it showed blood from an African nose that was twice its normal size. But the most frightening sight was the raw meat on the black girl?s chest. Her tiny titties were crisscrossed with bloody, deep bite marks and both nipples looked like they had been shredded. My little girl had taken a beating, but she had dished one out too.

Now Zee?s egg was taken out of the drum and Annisa?s and Mandy?s were placed inside the drum. This arrangement could be death for the girl who was picked to fight the fresher Zee. The drum rolled around and around. The egg was selected and everyone held their breath. The promoter opened the egg and read Mandy?s name.

Mandy spit blood on the carpet and said, ?I can?t loose because no matter who I kill it?s going to be a nigger.?

Zee smiled and countered, ?I?m going to kill me a fucking Barbie doll today. Honey, your own daddy won?t know who sucking his cock after I finish with your face.?

Five minutes later the next round started. Zee went on the attack trying to take advantage of her rested condition. My daughter ran away causing the black girl to miss with wild swing after wild swing. The crowd wasn?t very happy, but Mandy didn?t give a shit about the fans. She was there to take the car home and deal with whatever inner demons she had. Zee finally trapped her in a corner about halfway through the round and the fight was definitely on.

Mandy and Zee traded taped fist punches toe-to-toe with neither girl backing off. The spray of sweat and blood punctuated by the smack of fist on flesh marked almost two minutes of savage violence. Mandy staggered against into the corner after finally losing the punching contest. Zee came in after her. Mandy leaned against the corner and drove her right foot out taking Zee on the left knee.

The black girl staggered into Mandy and actually fell to her knees. Mandy pushed off the wall and put Zee on the carpet. Zee raised her feet to protect herself, but my girl was already coming down with her knees and Zee?s feet kicked pass my daughter?s grotesquely swollen face without doing in more damage. However, Mandy?s knees sank into the black girl?s belly, gutting her.

Zee groaned and tried to sit up. Her thrashing toppled Mandy onto her face. The two girls seemed to move in slow motion. Mandy rolled over groaning. She was exhausted and badly hurt. Her left cheek was split open and the left side of her face was a mask of blood. Zee?s fists had torn her to shreds. On the other hand Zee was doubled up holding her belly, puking. I wondered how bad she was hurt. Mandy rolled onto her ass with her taped bloody fists on the carpet behind her. She squinted through her eye slits and used her right foot to kick Zee in the top of her head again and again until the black girl rolled over and presented her back. Mandy scooted forward and drove her heel into the black girl?s kidneys twice before the round ended.

I had to drag Mandy to the side. She was hurt badly and as far as I could tell could see only out of her right eye slit. I worried about her left cheek. I hoped she healed well otherwise she was going to have a real fighter?s scar. Zee?s boyfriend dragged her to the side and was talking serious shit to her. She had to straighten up and fight Annisa next or all the pain and suffering would be for nothing. She cried and held her belly. He kept at her and she managed to stand in time for the next round. If Mandy had ruptured something inside the girl she could be bleeding to death before our very eyes.

Annisa moved in quickly and ignored Zee?s attempt to duplicate Mandy?s retreating stall tactics. Annisa stunned Zee by striking out with her long, thin right leg and driving the side of her foot straight into Zee?s busted belly. Zee cried out and folded over the leg going down in a heap. She folded so quickly that Annisa fell down hard with her, twisting her left leg under her at a painful angle. Annisa cried out and rolled over straightening her leg while Zee showed her courage and rolled to her hands and knees.

Annisa stood slowly testing her left leg. Zee screamed with resurgent fury and charged off the floor. She rammed head first into Annisa?s lower belly and slammed the tall thin black girl hard into the opposite wall, giving her stomach something to worry about. Annisa groaned and hammered on Zee?s back. Zee started using Annisa?s gut like a tackling dummy. Annisa spit over Zee?s back with each impact. She timed Zee?s retreat and charge perfectly and connected with a knee to Zee?s face. Zee fell backwards on her knees bleeding from the nose. Annisa leaning in the corner lifted her right leg up and stomp kicked straight for Zee?s big chest. Her long thin foot sank into the 40DD left breast. Zee?s brown black tit folded around Annisa?s coal black foot. Zee grunted and flew backwards. She ended up with her feet doubled under her ass and her head on the bloody carpet. Her mound was exposed.

Annisa?s deadly right foot exploded into Zee?s cunt with a savage stomp. Zee?s body was already flat against her heels and she had no where to go. The stomp sounded like a bat hitting a hanging carcass. Zee squealed and sat up despite her busted belly. Annisa?s foot hit again at a slightly different angle. Zee cried out and grabbed the leg. Annisa cursed and tried to strike Zee?s face, but it was buried against her thigh. Annisa screamed again as Zee?s teeth ripped into her muscular thigh. Annisa jerked at her leg. Zee twisted and turned throwing Annisa onto her side in a heap.

Zee tried to crawl on the downed girl, but a knee to the side of her head put her on her side. Now Annisa rolled on top of Zee and tried to hammer her. Zee jammed a bloody fist into Annisa?s chin and knocked her back on her side. Zee tried to roll on top and got scissored by African?s long legs. Zee groaned as her sides were crushed. She drove her left elbow in to Annisa?s belly. Using the elbow as the third leg of a tripod, Zee drove her right fist down against the bloody pulps on Annisa?s chest. Annisa fought back with both fists to Zee?s exposed face and of course the crushing scissors.

Zee?s nose seemed to come apart in a new spray of blood after taking six or seven hard long punches on its bridge. Zee flopped face first on the African girl?s belly. Annisa used the last of her strength to roll Zee onto her side. Annisa straightened out and clamped on her scissors. The blood still flowed from the bites on her thigh and her ruined tits, but she locked in those long legs and crushed Zee?s sides. Zee groaned and struck at the rock hard thighs with both fists. Annisa clamped even tighter. Zee gasped and cried out like something inside her had broken. Between Mandy?s knee drop and Annisa?s python legs I was sure something was wrong inside Zee?s belly.

Zee writhed and finally seemed to pass out. As soon as she went limp, Annisa climbed on top and punched down into the limp girl?s face for the last thirty seconds of the round. Zee?s face came apart. When the battering was done both girl?s were covered in one another?s sweat and blood. We?re talking coated in blood up to the elbows!

Annisa crawled to her father. Now she had to recover and fight next. Zee?s boyfriend tried to wake her up, but she was still limp. The promoter checked her out and pronounced she was still alive and had to the next round to recover. Mandy and Annisa would have to fight it out again.

This time Mandy wasted no time. She moved inside Annisa?s long arms and jammed her up. Mandy worked on the girl?s middle until Annisa grabbed her and tried the knee strike again. Mandy took the knee on her own thigh and then rammed her head upward into underside of Annisa?s chin. The black girl staggered backwards sputtering. It looked like her clashing teeth had either bit off the tip of her tongue or ripped the inside of her cheeks. She staggered against the wall blood pouring from her mouth.

Mandy charged in and took one of those deadly long right feet straight on her mound. Mandy groaned and backed away as Annisa came back out of the corner. Annisa snapped a kick into the side of Mandy?s left thigh. The impact sounded like a rifle shot and Mandy almost fell as her thigh muscle had a spasm. Annisa?s right fist smashed flush on Mandy?s left cheek causing the open swollen wound to explode.

Mandy cried out and went down on her back. Annisa raised her right foot to stomp. My bloody blonde former beauty queen scissor kicked and snapped Annisa?s left angle out from under her. Annisa fell hard and looked to have hurt her long deadly weapons. Mandy rolled into range and stomp kicked Annisa in her belly. The black girl grunted and spun on her hip to kick back, but Mandy had already rolled away.

Mandy pulled up by the wall and turned around as Annisa got up limping on her left ankle. Mandy moved forward carefully. She circled making sure that the black girl?s left leg was indeed hurt. She then moved quickly to the side and closed. Annisa?s back fist missed Mandy?s face and hit the side of her head. It hurt, but Mandy?s right uppercut took Annisa on the chin as she turned to face the bloody blonde. The punch snapped Annisa?s head back on her long neck and she staggered backwards.

Mandy followed and drove another right into the black girl?s open mouth. Annisa?s head snapped again and she fell against the wall. Immediately her right foot came out in its deadly defensive kick. Mandy took it on her hip and grabbed the foot with her left wrist and lifted it up while she rushed against Annisa. The crowd roared as the white girl made the tall black girl do a standing split. Annisa cried out as her crotch was split wide. Mandy dropped her right fist and literally scrubbed the bloody rough tape of her knuckles back and forth across the black girl?s pussy. Annisa screamed in fury and pain while she tried to hammer Mandy?s kidneys with both fists. Mandy took the punishment and fisted the tall girl?s cunt. Despite her best efforts Mandy couldn?t ram her taped fist up Annisa?s tight cunt, but she could batter it and rub it raw.

Perhaps Mandy could have finished the fight, but she was enjoying brutalizing Annisa?s cunt so much that something approximately a smile spread across my girl?s ruined lips. Annisa screamed and begged, but Mandy kept her pinned against the wall even when the black girl?s left leg gave way. Mandy almost buckled under the strain, but she had the angle and she kept her prey staked out. The round ended with Annisa?s pussy lips swollen and raw. She had been treated to a brutal cunt busting.

Now it was Mandy?s time to fight Zee. Zee?s boy friend slapped her bloody face again and again, but Zee was just flopping. The promoter started a count. When it was clear Zee was out of the fight the crowd roared. A lot of bets were settled, but more bets were now made on the catfight to a finish.

Zee?s boyfriend snarled, ?Fucking useless cunt!?

Then he stormed out of the place leaving his girlfriend to her fate. Maybe I wasn?t the biggest bastard on the face of the planet. Hell, I would have least given my daughter a ride to the emergency room. I don?t want to make a big thing about it, but that?s just the kind of caring father I am. Yep, father of the year, that?s me.

Well the girls got a lengthy rest as the blood soaked taped was cut off their hands. The promoter announced that the catfight to a finish would be no rules, no submissions over five minute rounds until one girl was unable to continue after a round break. Apparently he liked the results of the fist fighting over rounds so much that he modified the catfight, but the crowd liked it and I figured it was six of one and half a dozen of the other. One of these girls would come out of this with a car and the other might not come out of it at all.

The promoter had Zee dragged into the other room. A couple of guys looked around and decided why not. They hadn?t gotten any pussy yet and there was still a warm one in the other room. Yep, I was feeling pretty good about myself now. There were at least a half of dozen people in the world worse than me.

With their fingers freed for the first time in what seemed to be an eternity the two survivors stalked each other like some savages out of prehistory. The African girl had given up English and was jabbering in her own language. Mandy was quiet. She had her one useable eye focused on the black girl?s limping left leg. My bloody cheerleader was a cold methodical calculating bitch fighter for sure.

Annisa reached out to grab for Mandy?s matted blonde hair. Annisa?s wild tangled hair was shorter and not nearly as easy to grab, but once hands were in it they had a lot to hold onto. Mandy leapt forward and rammed her shoulder into Annisa driving the black girl back and then off her feet. They landed hard with Mandy on top. Before the finished bouncing, Mandy had her claws in Annisa?s face and her teeth on the already mulched chest. Annisa screamed and used Mandy?s hair to pull her bloody face back from the ravaged buds on the black bloody chest.

Mandy?s facial attack opened up both Annisa?s swollen cheeks. Annisa screamed and pressed up on her right foot. Mandy slid off the wet black skin and Annisa was suddenly climbing on top. Mandy was careful to catch the girl?s thigh in a leg lock preventing her from mounting, but now Annisa reached for Mandy?s face. Her right fingers clawed at the terrible cut on Mandy?s left cheek and my girl screamed in agony. Black bloody fingers mauled away at the red meat inside Mandy?s cheek.

My girl retaliated by digging both sets of her nails into the black girl?s shredded tits. Once into the flesh, Mandy dragged downward. The pain and fear of further mutilation must have been enough because Annisa grabbed both of Mandy?s wrists. She screamed and pulled, trying to pull out the bloody claws without further damaging her own tits. It was a fruitless effort. Mandy?s claws came out with bits of meat under each finger nail and a fresh coating of blood.

Mandy jerked her hands out to the side. Annisa fell forward. Mandy rolled and now they were side by side. Mandy drove her left knee up into Annisa?s crotch. The black girl cried out and butted Mandy on the forehead. The blow knocked them both silly for a few seconds, but it busted Mandy?s forehead open.

Annisa recovered first and let go of Mandy?s wrists. She should have gone for my daughter?s eyes or throat, but instead she went for revenge and attacked both of Mandy?s swollen 36Ds. Mandy screamed as her nipples and tits were ripped by Annisa?s claws, but Mandy?s tits were still relatively intact. The pain seemed to wake her up. My girl grabbed the black girl?s thin neck with both hands and started to choke her.

Mandy rolled on top with both hands choking the African. Annisa?s longer arms just reached my daughter?s neck and she clawed bloody streaks trying to get a hold. Mandy pressed down digging her thumbs into the black neck. Annisa kicked her legs and suddenly clamped on her rib cracking scissors. Mandy groaned, but kept choking.

Time seemed to stand still as they raced to see who would crush the life out of the other. Mandy gasped as the black girl jiggled her long legs, biting deep into Mandy?s side, compressing her ribs upward, crushing her guts, deforming her organs and restricting her ability to breath. Mandy bore the agony and continued to try and choke out her mortal enemy. Mandy?s own toes dug into the bloody carpet and she began to push forward, elevating her hips, taking away leverage from Annisa and giving it to her own choke.

Annisa?s eyes started to grow wilder and wilder. She jerked and thrashed. Somebody yelled she was pissing herself. Mandy?s neck was shredded bloody from Mandy?s claws, but she still bore down. Annisa jerked frantically with her legs trying to throw Mandy off. In one desperate heave, Mandy fell to the side breaking the deadly leverage she had on Annisa?s throat. Annisa immediately grabbed Mandy?s wrists and tried to pull the away. Mandy held onto the choke and squirmed up between Annisa?s loosened scissors.
Annisa clamped back on the scissors catching Mandy?s hips, but she could grind on the hips all day to no purpose.

While Annisa clawed at Mandy?s bloody wrists she forgot about my girl?s teeth. Mandy spread her elbows, ducked her head under her hands and once again brought her teeth to Annisa?s bloody chest. The black girl tried to cry out, but she still only had part of her throat open. The angle had lessened Mandy?s choke, but it was still locked on.

Annisa used one hand to rip at my daughter?s hair and the other to claw at the wound on her left cheek. The little savages stayed locked together that way for at least a minute. Then a handful of my daughter?s hair literally was ripped with her scalp. Mandy screamed and lost her bite. Now she found herself on her back with the skinny tall black girl straddling her waist.

Annisa immediately used her long arms to choke the blonde who had been choking her. Mandy?s shorter arms couldn?t reach the girl?s neck. Mandy was in trouble quick. Annisa rose up on her knees to get maximum leverage. My daughter kicked frantically and clawed at the skinny black arms to no avail. Then my bitch fighter slipped her right hand into Annisa?s crotch and penetrated the black girl with three fingers.

Annisa squealed and lunged forward to escape the gouging fingers. Annisa knee walked right over Mandy and across the floor like a dog that had been bitten on the ass by a flea. Mandy rolled over quickly and got up. I no longer recognized her face and even her blonde hair was stained red. A huge wad of tangled red-blonde hair lay to the side of their battleground. Annisa stopped and turned with an animal snarl.

Mandy was already up. Her right foot kicked out football style and connected with Annisa?s jaw just as she started to push up from all fours. Her head snapped back and she ended up flat on her back looking up at the ceiling. She coughed and spit out a mouthful of blood and three or four bits of teeth. Another shard of tooth was sticking through the remains of her upper lip. Annisa was flat on her back, legs spread and arms flopped at angles..

Mandy staggered forward, took aim and knee dropped on the black girl?s crotch. The brutal wet thud of her right knee on Annisa?s pubic bone surely ended the fight. A second later the promoter called time. Mandy fell backwards, rolled over and started vomiting. Annisa didn?t move. Her father labored to wake her up, but like Zee she wasn?t moving.

Five minutes later Mandy was declared the winner. I gathered her up and did the fatherly thing. I got her to the emergency room, gave a false name and said I had found her along the side of the road. I know they got my license plate, but what the hell. I had stolen the car that morning. I made sure she knew where her new car was parked and I even left her all the cash she had won. That last bit took some will power, but I was equal to the temptation.

I might have stuck around, but I got word from the promoter that Zee was taking a dirt nap and Annisa was going to be laid up a long time in the hospital. Cops had not connected the appearance of two girls who had obviously been in a terrible fight. Annisa?s father had no desire to have the cops snooping around how he got into the country. But the promoter worried that one cop station might look at the other cop station?s report or perhaps the hospital reports might be matched and somebody might start asking questions. I thought it might be better that I found somewhere else to live for awhile. I checked back in with Mandy a year later. She had a fine scar on her cheek, still looked pretty and her nose had set nicely. She was engaged to be married to a local rich kid and knocked up again. She was still happy with her car. Of course her mother was still screaming at her and looking for me. She knew exactly who was responsible for Mandy?s brutal fight. Fuck the bitch if she can?t take a joke. She knew I was a dick when she married me.

Hopefully, the asshole Mandy is marrying is a better man than me. It wouldn?t take much, but enough about that. I?ve got these two fifty year old boozer whores all worked up and with a little bit of luck I can get them out in the alley. Both of them got huge stripper tits and a lot of years on their knees in the streets giving blow jobs. Looks like its going to b a great fight! They?ve both promised me that they?ll take the other?s tits home in their purses. And it only cost me a couple of hundred dollars in buying drinks and several hours of listening to their bullshit like I cared, a small price to pay.

[MikeJV]

EXCELLENT, GREAT story!!!

btw: will you be finishing the "Renee" series?

MikeJV

[catfiter17]

Cage...Clapton...God.....
Not necessarily in that order of course.....

Thanks Cage...

-c

[cage]

The Renee series is warming on a back burner.

I folded her series and three other storylines into the Island series to unify several of my ongoing characters and reach some resolutions that I overloaded on complexities and possibilities. I had to shut it down until my mind cleared and I could focus again.

I mistakenly believed that would make it easier to write the series because I already had the background set up, but it actually made the job of writing the next story in the series harder to do than starting something new with no history to worry about.

Writing four or five standalone or two of stories is easier to start and finish than one story a lengthy series. But I will return and finish Renee stories.